Wednesday, 26 June 2013

Trapped by an octopus

This is a reading activity tht we did hope you understand the book.Enjoy.It was a nice sunny day and a family had 7 kids and 1 mom. Mom needed to stretch out the money so there could be enough money to buy food for everybody.” I have a invitation to go to my friend's fancy dress party”. I said,”I’ll make some clothes”,answered mom.As she started ripping a old sheet of shtrips,I sighed. She fought it was going to be a boring costume but at least there was a lot of food. Turns out it was not the costume was a octopus plus her brother made a octopus head. In the party she was swinging around her tentacles hitting the boys and finally she got to eat but there was a problem she couldn’t get out.All she had was her underneath so all she did was just standing there and looking at the food that were disappearing.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aaron,
    I really liked your post and good drawing and information.Keep up the great work Aaron.

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  2. Good retelling skills Aaron. There are some spelling errors and some things that don't quite make sense like looking at the food that 'were' disappearing. Do you know which word should be there?

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