Friday 14 June 2013

War of Taragen Narrative

This is a narrative about secret agents on a mission attaking the pepole of regens.Hope you Enjoy.Once upon a time there lived an Emperor penguin,his name was Jack. He lived in the bitterly cold Antarctica. He wanted to go to the movies to see ‘Emperor penguin, secret Agent’ but he didn’t have any money to buy a ticket to go.

Jack was walking along the snow track very upset when suddenly he found a piece of paper sticking out of the Snow,he picked it up, he was so excited because it was a ticket to the movies. Then he was jumping around like a rabbit until brrrrrrrrrring his watch rang and he noticed the movie had started he raced to the cinemas and gave the ticket. Once he was in he looked at the top there was the superstars .They went away suddenly Jack was getting scanned then he got teleported in the movie. When he was inside he said angrily, “let me out of here” then came the agents they said,” we need you”. The Agents replied,” what for answered Jack”,”to kill the Orca’s and the Leopard seals that are destroying animals and cities all around the world. Now they are here to destroy us,if we defeat all of them all of us will automatically transport back to our home.

Captain Jalen said “Now gather up ,here is the plan Mike and Brooklyn will go to the city of Taragen and bring all the Leopard seals to our trap that we made then we all will go inside and find the killer whales then we will ambush them”that sounds like a good plan said Mike, captain said thank you but it might not work oh yeah I forgot to give Jack his weapons here it is. His weapons are tiny bombs,whipping laser and ice breaker.When they arrived Mike and Brooklyn found all the leopard seals soldiers and ran,sadly they got died. The coast was clear they were ready to go in the tunnel of death.Jack went first because he got the ultimate weapons ,they found all the killer whales soldiers then they got ready to ambush. Once they came Jack got his whipping laser and whip some of them to the wall Suddenly they got frozen.The reason they were frozen is because it is so cold that the walls can make anybody freeze.They carried on swimming until they got to the biggest orca in the whole wide world.

The killer whale let out a big roar then the secret agents did their special move tornado spin,they were swimming around and around until they made their tornado. Again the Orca let out his big raw and the tornado stopped. Then Jack jumped into action and started throwing his tiny bombs that made him go back then he used his whipping laser that made him go back more and finally he used his ice breaker and down came a lot of ice with a lot of power the ice breaker can hit anything.When he was finished all of them returned home and they lived happily ever after. The End
 

1 comment:

  1. Great narrative Aaron! I liked how Jack was sucked into the movie and he had to help the secret agents otherwise he couldn't go home.

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