Eel of omaru creek

This is my Narative,hope you enjoy. Once upon a time there was a beautiful river called Omaru creek. An eel named Aaron was attending school. Suddenly nasty people came and threw oil,rubbish bags and chemicals in the river. Then the alarm bell rang,the alarm bell means that people have been throwing chemicals in the water that can kill them. Everybody swam for their lives but Aaron could not escape he was stuck in his desk. As it nearly hit him he got out and swim as fast as he could. The school was gone and never could be rebuilt because that was the last wood from the water. Aaron decided to discuss this with the government. So he went to the kingdom of fresh water.He said to the government,”Oh mighty kind government there have been humans polluting our land we offer you to send the great fish soldiers to our land.The government said,”that is so sad.Ok then,tomorrow I will send the fish soliders”.The next morning.’’Now here is the plan’’,said the captain.”We will go to the bridge and cut it in half when they come”.So they came and cutted it in half and the kingdom lived happily ever after.